Beautiful Morning Good
The sunshine’s glow is identical to the illumination of your smile
Which always encourages me to stop and stare a while
Song birds lull me awake
With majestic tales of your benevolence
Sweet as candy and as intoxicating as brandy
The touch of your skin tickles my soul’s deepest depths
Whenever I gaze upon you I momentarily lose breath
Six senses are overwhelmed by your beauty without an inch of nudity
Good Morning Beautiful
This poem was not written all at one time but rather in sections. I was inspired by the many women that I have come in contact with. They often speak of how they wish men were nicer and sweeter. With this knowledge I decided to formulate three poetic texts to be sent out to several young ladies as wake up texts. The humor of this situation is that initially, the young ladies enjoyed the text but things quickly changed. The first text is the first line. I thought that by using the sun as a metaphor for their smile would glorify the beauty of their expressions of happiness. The first responses were that they were generally delighted by the nice texts, and because it was completely unexpected it shocked them.
The second text was the second line. The beauty of this line was through the oratory imagery that I created with the idea of “song birds [that] lull me awake”, which also gave indication that they were the first person on my mind that day. In addition, it shows how significant their presence and loveliness of their character is to universe in that the most free animals, birds, would be telling of it. Only one young lady responded to the text with delight.
The third text was the longest of them all and it became the remainder of the poem. It begins with two similes that describe my inner feelings that I had for them when I have had physical contact with them as something that is both “sweet” and “intoxicating” and gives a sense of how pleasurable the experience is. In addition, the contact elevates from a physical level and even reaches a spiritual level “touch of your skin tickles my soul’s deepest depths.” I inserted this part into the poem to deflect the common belief that in physical aspects of a relationship, men aren’t connected emotionally.
The concluding lines express how I am astonished by her beauty endlessly; the greatness of her features never fails to bring me joy. However, I counter that idea with the next line “six senses are overwhelmed with your beauty without an inch of nudity”, indicating that not only there love for her on a physical level, but also on the on a higher plane of existence, the unexplainable sense or divine force that humans possess. And I end the poem very simply with a pleasant greeting “Good Morning Beautiful,” the simplicity of the phrase creates irony in the poem as it contrasts with the rest of the poem which elaborates on the complexities of her beauty.
On the third day none of the young ladies responded to the text. I have come upon the lesson that women don’t really like sweet and nice guys or I just talk to mean girls. Either way, sucks for me. So Rest In Peace Romance and Long Live The Romantic.
Jahlil Over and OUt